The first line of the prologue was too short and general, so I went for the first line of the first chapter and there are a WHOLE LOT of names that would make it obvious.
Six years after _______ returned to _______, and a bare season after he and my twin brother ____ nearly killed each other over which of them should be the king's heir, our father's estate at ______ was destroyed in a battle that began by accident.
And I'm just about to head out the door to turn this one back in to the library, so have a go at this one as well. I'll leave in the first letters of the names, though.
The big groundcar jerked to a stop centimeters from the vehicle ahead of it, and A------ P--, driving, swore under his breath. M---- settled back again in his seat beside him, wincing at a vision of the acrimonious street scene from which P--'s reflexes had delivered them.
Checkers, your line was setting off "You've read this! Recently!" bells in my head, but it wasn't until I saw faeriemusicsmom's comment that I actually went "OMG IT'S TOTALLY STRONG POISON HOW DID I NOT KNOW THAT."
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Date: 9/11/09 09:27 pm (UTC)Six years after _______ returned to _______, and a bare season after he and my twin brother ____ nearly killed each other over which of them should be the king's heir, our father's estate at ______ was destroyed in a battle that began by accident.
And I'm just about to head out the door to turn this one back in to the library, so have a go at this one as well. I'll leave in the first letters of the names, though.
The big groundcar jerked to a stop centimeters from the vehicle ahead of it, and A------ P--, driving, swore under his breath. M---- settled back again in his seat beside him, wincing at a vision of the acrimonious street scene from which P--'s reflexes had delivered them.
Checkers, your line was setting off "You've read this! Recently!" bells in my head, but it wasn't until I saw faeriemusicsmom's comment that I actually went "OMG IT'S TOTALLY STRONG POISON HOW DID I NOT KNOW THAT."