Man, this is great! You always do that, though :) Only one thing I'd point out --- their boots should be switched. Gen's boots are ankle boots, and although we don't know what Sophos's boots look like, they're probably more standard-style aristocratic boots... whatever that looks like.
P.S. Gen's posture is absolutely how I picture him standing when he's messing with people. "What? Get on a horse? I don't want to do that. Go away."
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Date: 8/2/10 07:56 pm (UTC)P.S. Gen's posture is absolutely how I picture him standing when he's messing with people. "What? Get on a horse? I don't want to do that. Go away."