New Picture!

[thief-alchemist.livejournal.com]

Haven't posted here in ages, but i was drawing this and thought i'd share. It's a work in progress,so any mistakes in anatomy you can find would be helpful.



I have been wanting to continue my Thief comic, but it's on my other computer and i havent had a chance since the move... :(

A Conspiracy Of Kings. I am counting the minutes...

Comments

[katewaits.livejournal.com]

Gorgeous! They really look like a couple to be reckoned with.

I'll just add one critique. It's the hook. I know his right arm is bent, but somehow it just ends up looking too short. Straight armed, the hook would reach to the ends of the fingers on his left hand, I think, but it looks like it's stunted a little. Maybe it's just not obvious his arm is bent unless you look really closely -- but even then it still seems a tiny bit short to me.

I know that's incoherent. I'm not an artist so I can't give you "why", just "what it looks like to me".

But really, the texture is amazing. Like you could feel the nap of the fabric through the monitor. Great work!

[thief-alchemist.livejournal.com]

Most definitely.;P

Yeah, i agree with the hook. I fiddled endlessly with it until i got fed up and did a "i'll come back later" I'll post an updated one soon hopefully and make some changes, see if it's any better.

Thanks for the commnts and compliments. :D