apologetic

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i'm so sorry i seem to be spamming. sorry...

but i couldn't sleep last night cause i wanted to write a pome, but was too lazy to get up from bed, if you get what i mean. i don't know if this violates the rules, but this pome isn't exactly fanfiction so i don't know where to put it. i wrote it today, and it's rather bad. but i'm high you see, so i do anything. it's about Attolia. and it's extremely inaccurate at certain points cause i wanted it to be all poetic and floaty. and i didn't make it rhyme. hope you like it. and again i'm very sorry...somehow i feel that as a new member i shouldn't be taking much space...and again i'm guiltstricken cause i bet you're getting annoyed at the apologizing. sorry...

Shadow Queen
Shadow queen...shadow queen...who is she?
Haunted by amphora spectres
The fragrance of hair oil strangles.
Coleus leaves are scattered in her fragile frozen heart.

The ambassador, avec beard, attempts to poach her kingdom
Nothing he gets 'cept shadow diplomacy from a shadow queen.
She recalls shades of a time gone past. When she danced in a pale dress beneath
The orange trees.The ruby earrings murmur.

But a severed hand lies on the floor, cold as frozen ice.
It has rent her mask in two, it has torn her shadows apart.
For it takes a thief, it takes a thief-

to steal her heart.

p.s. the poem does resemble a sort of bush. coleus bush?