[identity profile] rowana.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] queensthief
At [livejournal.com profile] checkers65477's request, my thoughts on the book. I'm assuming that everyone here has now read it. If anyone hasn't, please post an angry comment, and I'll stick the whole thing behind a cut.

Although everyone kept telling me that KoA was less emotionally intense than the others, I didn't notice a lack of, well, intensity. I suppose there wasn't quite as much of the 'He's not really who we've been thinking he is through the entire book!', or the 'She cut off Gen's hand!', but I think in some ways, the lack of those massive revelations made it easier to focus on all the lovely small details that were so abundant in this book.

What I really, truly did love were the scenes between Gen and Irene. Especially those in front of the attendants. The scenes with Relius were great too, (and the little ones with Helen and the Magus and their insights) and of course, Costis. Who definitely has a sense of humour. :) The ending was interesting. Certainly not expected. I have to re-read that bit.


I'm still puzzled by a few things (and would be grateful if anyone can answer), such as the message at the temple. Phresine's story as well, though I'm beginning to understand how it related to Costis, in terms of being the slave and making a choice, I don't understand why Gen was so distressed. The fact that Gen really is the King of Attolia has also hit home, and Helen's discussion with the Magus about Gen perhaps having to sacrifice favouring the people he loves, for the good of a nation.

But, surely Helen can't marry Sounis, even if Sophos is gone, not after it's been revealed that Sounis was getting help from the Mede? And on the subject of Sophos, (and that great big King of Kings hint at the end) I have only one thing to say. How long until the next book?

Date: 2/10/06 08:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 9mil.livejournal.com
i haven't read it yet, but i'm glad to say i'm FINALLY picking it up tonight. this isn't angry, as i know secret techniques of distraction and avoidance. i will have to finish another book before i start koa, but as soon as i'm done koa, i will discuss with a FURY!

Date: 2/10/06 08:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] checkers65477.livejournal.com
I don't know how to link to our discussion thread, so I'll copy and paste my guess as to the meaning of the temple.

We talked about this in the chat and, *ahem* here's my take on this. Gen went to the temple to ask, "who should rule Attolia--me, or the queen? Signed, Attolis." The priestess just ripped it in half and gave him the part that said, "Attolis" and told him, "here is your answer." He was furious because he couldn't even consult the goddess himself. He went back to his room and cried tears of homesickness. But, I think he was also upset because he had then been told TWICE by the gods that he was meant to rule.

Remember when he said, "heads you rule, lilies I do" and the coin came up lilies over and over? He didn't want to rule, but he knew by then that the gods meant for him to. And, I think that's why Irene was not upset at the idea of his ruling and his resistence to it. She must have known that it was destined by the gods that he WOULD rule and that he would have to in the end.


And I was very surprised by the change in Irene from the other books. She was tender, although she still had her dangerous moments. I can only guess that Gen's love brought out the best in her. And she completely trusted him; she never seemed to doubt his opinion or his motives. I expected the book to include "trust issues" between the two of them, although I'm glad for their sakes that they were able to begin to repair the damage to themselves that their pasts had done.

Date: 2/11/06 01:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fabricalchemist.livejournal.com
He's pissed off that he's not in charge of his own life, I think. He doesn't want to be the king, but he doesn't have a choice...and for someone as independent as Gen, that's gotta rankle more than a little.

Date: 2/11/06 02:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dannybailey.livejournal.com
Wow, that makes so much sense! I didn't comprehend the scene in the temple, particularly not to have such a significant meaning. Still, that is really clever; I can definitely see how it all fits together.

Date: 2/10/06 10:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] checkers65477.livejournal.com
This ties in with my question on the main page. If no one gets the point of the visit to the temple, was it written in a way that is a bit too obscure? Do you want the majority of your readers missing a rather important part of the rationale behind how the characters behave? We know these books as well as anyone, and even we have difficulty understanding.

I feel funny saying that knowing MWT may read our posts. Not criticism! Just discussion fodder!

As for the story, maybe Gen was uncomfortable because the king was breaking his oath to the gods and he was worried his gods would know that he didn't want what they'd given him--to rule Attolia. And Costis, as did the slave in the story, forced the king to keep his word, not by hitting him with an amphora, but by making him spar. Although, to my knowledge, Gen never made any promises to the gods.

Other comments? I'm sort of at a loss, too.

Date: 2/11/06 02:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ferris-girl.livejournal.com
I understood what the whole Temple Passage meant, But it took me a long time to realize that Attolis was the name of the King. Which is interesting. I think I'll post a question about it.

Date: 2/11/06 02:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cyberskiver.livejournal.com
Eugenides probably had to swear some kind of oath when he became king, so that might be the promise he made to the gods.

Date: 2/14/06 10:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caroline-k.livejournal.com
Yeah, I thought that was very weird , that no one speaks of Gen in Eddis. I dunno, maybe they see him as forsaking them for Attolia? I thougtht that the Eddisians would either be gloating that they have one up on Attolia, or seceretly happy that Gen was now Attolia's problem.

Date: 2/28/06 04:04 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Considering Gen was picked and trained directly by his grandfather to be his grandfather's heir, it makes sense for nobody to talk about the thieves right?, since nobody knows anything about them because the knowledge/training/history is passed from current thief to future thief. Plus, in QofA Gen mentioned that there were drawings, blueprints? to Sounis's megaron and that he had moved them out of the library when the Magus came to stay...nobody but Gen knew about the drawings.

Date: 2/11/06 10:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] checkers65477.livejournal.com
Part of me would like to see Eddis have a story of her very own. I like her very much.

I'm only guessing, but I feel certain Sophos will reappear in time to save her from a marriage to that nasty dude Sounis. In the past she refused to marry him. Why would she change her mind now? Gen used to be adamant that she not, but now he seemed almost to accept the idea. With the war over, she shouldn't have to, should she? Unless, with her thief gone, she is in danger from him...

Date: 2/11/06 11:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cyberskiver.livejournal.com
When I read the two scenes with Eddis and the magus, I wondered if they might come to love each other. It may be wishful thinking on my part, but it would be nicely ironic.

Date: 2/12/06 02:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] checkers65477.livejournal.com
Yes! I wondered that, too. I'd like Eddis and Sophos to get together, though. But we have to find someone for the Magus...hmmm, how old is Phresine?

In another thread, I said maybe Sophos has disappeared on his own and has become someone quite different from the naive chatterbox he was. Maybe he has hidden himself and will surprise us all.

Date: 2/13/06 09:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caroline-k.livejournal.com
Whoo! Hven't been here in a while, and this place exploded!
Anyway, I'm so glad you liked it, Rowana! It is really just as good as the other ones.
lol Yeah, we gotta find someone for the Magnus, hes like all alone.And I think that Sophos is definetly alive, just bidding his time before he comes out in the open.
-Caroline *whose trying to get caught up with events going on here*

Date: 2/24/06 12:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cherryblosomjen.livejournal.com
That's another idea about Sophos. Deep down, I'm pretty sure that he's dead...

*gasp* That would be unacceptable! [Makes a face] :(

Date: 2/28/06 04:08 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
total hopeful-fan hypothetical here: what if Gen takes over Eddis, in the interest of the country as per his oaths, and the Magus works for Gen as an advisor, since Attolia is a "nice warm country"?

Date: 3/2/06 03:56 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Maybe Gen could have her be the administer of Eddis...after all, he can't administer that much land all by himself. He has his hands full with the Attolian barons.

Date: 2/14/06 06:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sunbeamchica.livejournal.com
I'm still puzzled by a few things (and would be grateful if anyone can answer), such as the message at the temple. Phresine's story as well, though I'm beginning to understand how it related to Costis, in terms of being the slave and making a choice, I don't understand why Gen was so distressed. The fact that Gen really is the King of Attolia has also hit home, and Helen's discussion with the Magus about Gen perhaps having to sacrifice favouring the people he loves, for the good of a nation.

hmmm...in regards to the story Phresine tells Gen, I thought the goddess in her story was supposed to represent Irene. I don't think Gen made any *huge* promises to one of the goddesses since QOA and Phresine probably wouldn't have known which gods/goddesses that Gen worships in the first place. I think it was Phresines way to gently remind Gen that he needs cherish and love Irene and not fail her. Gen seemed most uncomfortable during the parts of the story where the main character almosts fails in his promise to the goddess, so in a sense Gen wouldn't want to somehow fail Irene either. Does that make any sense?

from,
Jessica

Date: 2/14/06 10:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caroline-k.livejournal.com
That actually DOES make alot of sense! I, for one was totally lost on that story, I think I need to re-read it. Again. I 'll definetly do so with your explanation in mind, Jessica!

About the message in the temple, I think checkers explained it really well on another thread, but I'll attempt tp paraphrase:

Basically, Gen went to the temple with a message for the gods, to the effect of "Who should rule Attolia, me or Irene, signed Attolis" or even something like "Who am I really; Eugenides or Attolis", and the priestess ripped it in half and gave him the part that said "Attolis" by way of an answer. So poor Gen was all upset , having been told by the Gods twice in the same day (the "lillies I rule" thing where the gods made it always land on lillies)that he needed to be king.
Hope that makes sense!

Another question: how did Gen know that Baron was ripping off the treasury?

Date: 2/14/06 10:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caroline-k.livejournal.com
Haha! Just noticed the temple question was already answered on this thread! So sorry guys, I'll pay more attention from now on, lol

Date: 2/15/06 03:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] checkers65477.livejournal.com
He somehow knew by the type of wheat.

The Baron was claiming to have grown a certain type of wheat and a certain amount, and everyone accepted that. Then, when Eugenides had those men talking to him about the wheat, he asked, "what are the different types of wheat you keep talking about?" They brought in that old guy who piled the samples on the table (funny scene) and Gen realized that the Baron had to be lying about what he was growing and figured out, somehow, that he was cheating on his taxes.

Date: 2/16/06 04:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caroline-k.livejournal.com
Ooh! I wonder how I missed that before, thanks so much checkers! So the baron was really growing a different type of wheat that yielded him more profit, but telling the crown he was growing another type that was worth less and therefore be taxed less. Gen is just so smart. And that WAS a pretty funny scene, lol

Date: 2/15/06 03:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] checkers65477.livejournal.com
Thanks, Jessica (I mean...sunbeamchica!), that makes a lot of sense.
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