apologetic

[jyms.livejournal.com]

i'm so sorry i seem to be spamming. sorry...

but i couldn't sleep last night cause i wanted to write a pome, but was too lazy to get up from bed, if you get what i mean. i don't know if this violates the rules, but this pome isn't exactly fanfiction so i don't know where to put it. i wrote it today, and it's rather bad. but i'm high you see, so i do anything. it's about Attolia. and it's extremely inaccurate at certain points cause i wanted it to be all poetic and floaty. and i didn't make it rhyme. hope you like it. and again i'm very sorry...somehow i feel that as a new member i shouldn't be taking much space...and again i'm guiltstricken cause i bet you're getting annoyed at the apologizing. sorry...

Shadow Queen
Shadow queen...shadow queen...who is she?
Haunted by amphora spectres
The fragrance of hair oil strangles.
Coleus leaves are scattered in her fragile frozen heart.

The ambassador, avec beard, attempts to poach her kingdom
Nothing he gets 'cept shadow diplomacy from a shadow queen.
She recalls shades of a time gone past. When she danced in a pale dress beneath
The orange trees.The ruby earrings murmur.

But a severed hand lies on the floor, cold as frozen ice.
It has rent her mask in two, it has torn her shadows apart.
For it takes a thief, it takes a thief-

to steal her heart.

p.s. the poem does resemble a sort of bush. coleus bush?

Comments

[jyms.livejournal.com]

=( but wilfred owen is cool. well, his poetry is interesting. of course, if you're going to have to analyse it and do test things...that's a totally different story. i had to do a presentation on anthem for doomed youth and the teacher said i repeated 'also' a lot. very comforting. but merchant was worse cause we had to act it out. hmm frankenstein. kind of brushed past it last year.we didn't actually do the story, we just studied the intro. serious. we were supposed to learn something about the writing process from there, besides gothic thingums. we had to write a gothic story! this guy from my class wrote about gargoyles coming to life and terrorizing the neighbourhood. i wrote about candles going out and sleeping in a bed big enough for 5 people.

i like the 'bar' thing. it's so nice and ancientishy. (i have this addiction to ishy)and is there such a thing as usurping a kingdom? (it's pretty ironic isn't it? considering Attolia's a queen) i always thought of it as a usurp the throne thing.

[allthingevil123.livejournal.com]

frankenstein was ok cos we only had to write one essay for our coursework on it, but we also get to watch the video at which point out teacher told us to bring in permission slips cos theres a part where the monster tears out frankenstiens's girlfriend's heart, we forgot...
macbeth had a strange video as well, the scene leading up to where macbeth murders the king had a 'ghostly' dagger pop up, which should of been scary, except for sparkling bit around it and the 'ping' should every time it popped up....
my friends in a different class had to write a gothic stroy though they studied something else, we just did boring (but easy) essays on 'was macbeth really an evil man' i can't really remember the others though

well i think it is upsurp the throne, but then he's trying to upsurp the throne to steal her kingdom so it kinda work (i think, not sure how though)
bar does sound very archaic(a.k.a ancientishy:-)though